First Draft Feedback

We showed the first draft of our opening to several other students, in order to gain their feedback.
They stated what they found to be effective, and also what they felt didn't work so well.
The parts that people felt were effective were:

• The large range of shots
• The non diegetic sound
• Typography
• Flashback shots are effective

The parts that people felt were less effective:

• Horror genre unclear
• Ending too abrupt
• Title should appear at end

To improve, we moved the title ("Young Blood") to the end of the sequence.  We felt that this would also solve the problem of the ending being too abrupt and confusing.